CBSE Class 10 English 2024: question 4(b)
Set in the CBSE Class 10 board exam of 2024, paper 2/3/1, section B, question 4(b), for 5 marks. Try it first; the hints and our step-by-step solution are below.
Q4(b) · 5 marks · WritingCompetency-basedWriting Skills
You are Rahul / Rita, a student of DRK World School, Preet Vihar, Prem Nagar. You have recently noticed that the street in front of the school is being used as a thoroughfare by vehicles because of the construction work on the main street. This has led to a number of near fatal accidents involving school students who have become vulnerable to road injuries and exposure to toxic air and noise pollution while going to school. Write a letter to the Editor of a local daily in about 120 words highlighting the problem. You may also suggest possible solutions such as road safety signages, speed breakers, traffic timings.
Source: official question paper from cbse.gov.in (PDF). See it in the full 2024 board paper, set 2/3/1.
Hints
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Hint 1
Begin by stating why you are writing, then describe the problem.
Hint 2
Mention both accidents and pollution.
Hint 3
Close with the three solutions and an appeal.
Step-by-step solution
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- 1 mark
Format: sender's address, date, 'The Editor, [Newspaper], City', subject 'Danger to school students from traffic on Preet Vihar street', salutation 'Sir/Madam', close and signature.
- 2 marks
Body (model):
Through your newspaper I wish to draw attention to a serious problem near DRK World School, Preet Vihar. Because of construction on the main street, heavy traffic now uses our narrow school street. This has caused several near-fatal accidents, and students are vulnerable to road injuries. Vehicle fumes and constant honking also expose children to toxic air and noise pollution.
I suggest that the authorities put up road safety signboards, build speed breakers and place a traffic marshal at the gate. Heavy vehicles should be barred during school entry and exit hours.
I hope prompt action will keep our children safe.
Yours faithfully
Rahul - 1 mark
Organisation of ideas: formal tone, logical sequence, paragraphs.
- 1 mark
Accuracy: correct spelling, punctuation and grammar.
Answer: A letter to the editor of about 120 words stating the problem (accidents, pollution) and solutions (signages, speed breakers, traffic timings).
Where the marks are
- Correct format (1 mark)
- Problems and solutions (2 marks)
- Organisation and formal tone (1 mark)
- Accuracy (1 mark)
Revise the chapter
- Chapter: Writing Skills
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