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EnglishCBSE Class 10 · Board exam 2023, set 2/6/1 · 5 marks · Writing

CBSE Class 10 English 2023: question 5(a)

Set in the CBSE Class 10 board exam of 2023, paper 2/6/1, section B, question 5(a), for 5 marks. Try it first; the hints and our step-by-step solution are below.

Q5(a) · 5 marks · WritingCompetency-basedWriting Skills

The given bar graph shows the increasing use of skin care products by men and women over the period of three months. Write an analytical paragraph elaborating the given information in about 100 words.

Figure in the paper: Two grouped bar charts side by side, each with y-axis 'Number of times' (scale 10 to 35) and x-axis months June, July, August. Left chart 'Products used by Men' and right chart 'Products used by Women'; each has three bars per month for Facewash (plain white), Toner (diagonal hatched) and Sunscreen (dotted). Approximate values for men: June Facewash 33, Toner 25, Sunscreen 27; July Facewash 31, Toner 20, Sunscreen 25; August Facewash 35, Toner 22, Sunscreen 33. Approximate values for women: June Facewash 25, Toner 23, Sunscreen 33; July Facewash 23, Toner 25, Sunscreen 29; August Facewash 23, Toner 25, Sunscreen 35. See it in the official paper.

Source: official question paper from cbse.gov.in (PDF). See it in the full 2023 board paper, set 2/6/1.

Hints

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Hint 1

Read the values for each product in each month for men and women.

Hint 2

Compare the highest and lowest values and note rises and falls.

Hint 3

Finish with an overall conclusion in one paragraph.

Step-by-step solution

Each step shows the marks it earns, as an examiner would award them. Checked by an independent re-solve from the question paper.

  1. Content (2 marks) and organisation (2 marks): The bar graph compares the use of facewash, toner and sunscreen by men and women from June to August.

    Among men, facewash was used 33 times in June, fell to 31 in July and rose to 35 in August. Toner use fell from 25 to 20 and then recovered to 22. Sunscreen use dipped from 27 to 25 and then jumped to 33.

    Among women, sunscreen was the most used product, going from 33 to 29 and then to 35. Facewash use declined slightly from 25 to 23, while toner rose from 23 to 25 and stayed there.

    4 marks
  2. Conclusion and accuracy (1 mark): Overall, sunscreen and facewash were the most popular products, and use rose in August for both groups. Men use facewash more, while women prefer sunscreen. The trend shows growing grooming awareness. The paragraph is about 100 words in a single paragraph, with accurate language.

    1 mark

Answer: A single analytical paragraph of about 100 words describing the trends for men and women

Where the marks are

  • Content: data for both groups correctly described (2 marks)
  • Organisation: single cohesive paragraph with a conclusion (2 marks)
  • Accuracy (1 mark)

Revise the chapter

  • Chapter: Writing Skills

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